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Triple Tickle Trouble
Gift for Thunderbolt and Ticklishways

It was a bright, sunny, Saturday afternoon. But still, not everyone can be satisfied by weather alone. Take Lazer for example, he was as bored as he had ever been as he simply layed on the sofa and stared at the ceiling. "Oh my god... I'm so BORED!" Lazer moaned to himself as he continued to stare at the ceiling. "If something doesn't happen soon, I'm gonna slip into a bloody coma!" Suddenly, the doorbell rang, and Lazer immediatley jumped up and dashed to the door, to find Hypno and Bolt standing in the doorway. "Hey pal," Hypno said to Lazer. "Mind if we stay for a while?" Bolt asked. "By all means, PLEASE! I'm so bored!" Lazer said, happy that at least he could spend the afternoon with some friends. "Yeah, us too!" Hypno and Bolt moaned at the same time as they entered and layed on the other couches. "What are we gonna do?" Hypno asked, laying upside down hanging off the sofa. "Wish I knew," Lazer moaned back. "Well, think of an idea!" Bolt said, slightly frustrated. "It's not like an oppertunity is just gonna come through the window!" As Bolt said that, a flock of birds came flying by, and some of their feathers brushed off and came through the window. The three feathers layed on the coffee table, as the trio looked at them. Suddenly, they all looked at each other evily. "I have an idea!" they all said at the same time with an evil smirk, as they each grabbed a feather and dashed out the door.

Meanwhile, Sceprea, Scora and Blaze were just sitting on Scora's sofa, drinking tea and talking about something Bolt, Hypno and Lazer were VERY keen on listening on. "Sooo Blaze..." Scora said, "Who do you think is cuter - Bolt or Lazer?" "Pfft, it's clearly me," Lazer whispered from the window they were watching from. Bolt just moved his finger near Lazer, and shot him with a bit of electricity. "OW! What was that for?!" Lazer yelped at Bolt. "For lying," Bolt smirked. "Ummm..." Blaze thought, "That's tough... I'm gonna have to say... Both are very cute!" "Nooo!" Sceprea yelled "One has to be cuter! Who?!"   "I DUNNO! AAAAH!" Blaze yelled, then they all started laughing. "Wanna start?" Hypno asked the other two watchers. "Huh? I was waiting for you!" Lazer replied. "I thought you'd never ask," Bolt said with a smile. "Just remember... Sceprea's mine," Hypno said rather sternley. "And I get Blaze!" Lazer added. "I got a score to settle," "Sweet, I get the anthro bird then!" Bolt exclaimed. "Let's do this!" The trio yelled at the same time.

Hypno then used his powers to seal the three girls in ropes, as they were suspended in mid-air, helplessly tied. Then, the door swung open as Lazer, Bolt and Hypno walked causally into the girl's lounge room. "Good evening ladies... and Sceprea," Hypno smirked as he watched the girls desperatley try to struggle from their bonds. "You better let us go now!" Scora yelled as the three torturers took their positions, Bolt near Scora's feet, Lazer near Blaze's cheast, and Hypno near Sceprea's neck. "I'm afraid you're in NO position to warn us about anything!" Lazer laughed as he showed his feather. Blaze's eyes widened along with the other captives as their torturers showed their feathers. "Oh no, they're gonna tickle us!" Sceprea yelled in panic. "They learn rather quickly eh?" Bolt smirked as he drew his feather slowley near Scora's feet. "N-now now B-Bolt! Let's not do what I think you're gonna doHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!NOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!" Scora laughed as Bolt started tickling her feet.

Then, almost simontaniously, Lazer started tickling Blaze's belly, and Hypno started tickling Sceprea's armpits. "AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAA!PLEAHEEHEEHEESELAZERHAHAHAHA!STOPNOWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Blaze pleaded with Lazer as he kept stroking the feather on her sensitive tummy. "I don't think so!" Lazer said. "At least... not for anouther hour anyway!" "HYPNOHOHOHOHAHAHAHA!IMWARNINGYOUHOOHOOHAHAHAHAHA!LETMEOUTNOWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!" Sceprea warned Hypno between laughter. Hypno just stuck out his tounge and shook his head as he continued to tickle Scprea's armpits. "Hey, who's up for a contest?" Lazer called out to the other two torturers,. "What kind?" Bolt asked, not taking a second to stop tickling Scora's feet. "Who can... make their captive laugh the hardest, for the longest?" Lazer smiled, he as well not stopping the tickling. "Count me in!" Hypno yelled. "WAY ahead of you!" Bolt smiled. "OK!" Lazer said. "3...2...1...GO!"

And, at once, all three torturers started moving their feathers along the spot they were doing before, VERY fast. All the victems squealed like schoolgirls as the feathers looked like blurs on their feet, armpits and tummies. "NOOHOHOHOHAHAHAHAHA!PLEASEHAHAHAHAHAIMBEGGINGYOU!PLEASESTOPAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" Scora pleaded at Bolt. Bolt stopped for about two seconds and stroked his chin, looking like he was thinking. "Hmmm... NAH!" Bolt teased as he then turned his attention to Scora's toes. "AHAHAHAHAHAA!NOPLEASEHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!NOTMYTOOOESAHAHAHAHAHA!PLEHEEHEEHEESEHAVEMERCY!AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!" Scora squeled as Bolt stroked her toes very quickly with the feather. "Mer...cy? What that?" Bolt teased again as he then moved the feather inbetween her big toe and index toe, which made tears come down Scora's face.

Meanwhile, Blaze was in no better position then Scora as Lazer kept tickling her bellybutton, which drove her into hysterical laughter. "NOOHAHAHAHAHAHA!PLEASENOTTHEREAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!IMBEGGINGYOU!AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA!" Blaze laughed as Lazer looked at her with a wide grin. "Awww, is poor ickle Bwaze's tummy-wummy ticklwish?" Lazer cooed as he started to use both the feather on Blaze's bellybutton and the fingers on his spare hand on Blaze's stomach. "PLEASENOTAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHANOTTHERE!AHAHAHAHAHAICANTSTANDITAHAHAHAHA!" Blaze cried out in laughter as Lazer leaned near Blaze's head. "Awww, don't feel so down," Lazer teased, noticing that Blaze was now crying tears of laughter. Lazer then leaned to Blaze's face and kissed her on the forehead. Now Blaze was laughing, crying, and blushing at the same time.

Hypno, seening how effectve using fingers as well as the feather worked with Lazer, started using his spare fingers to tickle Sceprea's other armpit, which caused tears to stream down her face as well. "HYPNOHOHOHO!THISISYOURLASTCHANCEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!LETMEOUTNOWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!" Sceprea yelled at Hypno, who looked at her thighs. "You know, from this angle... you look kinda fat!" Hypno cackled as he kept tickling. Sceprea's left eyelid twitched wildely, as she always did when someone made fun of her weight. Hypno then took the hand he used to tickle Sceprea's spare armpit and sniffed it, retching fakely at the smell. "And you stink too! When did you last have a shower?" Hypno laughed, 'adding salt to the wound,' so to speak.

The trio of tickling torturers were having the greatest time EVER, and all would have gone smoothly if Avian hadn't been woken up by the laughter. From the stairway, he watched his mummy and her friends being tickled, and from past experience, he knew Hypno was the one that was holding them in the ropes. "Naughty Hypno's tickling nice lady again!" Avian said to himself. He then went into his room, and came back with a building block, and threw it at Hypno's head with such incredible force and accuracy, that it knocked Hypno out easily. Lazer looked at Hypno, concerned and completley oblivious that the ropes holding Blaze were now gone. "Hypno are you oka-OOOOFFF!" Lazer was interupted by Blaze punching him square in the face, knocking him out next to Hypno. Bolt noticed this, but before he could dash away, Scora used her spare foot to kick Bolt's face, sending him unconcious. Avian came down the stairs to his smiling mum. "Good boy Avian! You get chocolate ice cream after dinner tonight!" Scora congratulated her smiling and blushing son. "So what do we do with them?" Blaze asked the other girls.

Then, the girls looked at the feathers and rope on the ground, then at the torturers, then at each other wickidly. "I have an idea!" they all said as they each grabbed a feather and a piece of rope.

The end.
A gift for both Thunder-Bolt :iconthunder-bolt: and Ticklishways :iconticklishways:
This is easily the greatest tickle-story I've done so far. It will get over 10 billion veiwz and faves and comments in one week. LOL! Also, this is so far the second story of about 7 were Lazer ISN'T the victem! ZOMG! (whatever the hell ZOMG means...)

Out of boredom, Lazer, Hypno and Bolt decide to have a little fun with Blaze, Sceprea and Scora...

Lazer belongs to me.
Bolt belongs to Thunder-Bolt :iconthunder-bolt:
Everyone else belongs to Ticklishways :iconticklishways:
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zp92 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Student Digital Artist
EEEEYAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! :icongwahplz:
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LazyFox55 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
... you like it?
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zp92 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Student Digital Artist
yus 8D
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LazyFox55 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
figured. bolt hasnt even commented or faved this though...
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zp92 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Student Digital Artist
tell him :)
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LazyFox55 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
i did! i left a comment with a link to it on his profile as soon as i submitted it!
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zp92 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Student Digital Artist
mmm
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rmarnol Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
this is a GREAT story! it's so cute!
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LazyFox55 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
heh heh, thanks. :)
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Silvvy-The-Hedgehog Featured By Owner May 31, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
He he. These are getting old, yet are still so dang amusing. Good job, as expected. ^_^
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